The sentence you’re referring to seems to express a sense of injustice and cruelty about someone being expelled from a place despite knowing they wouldn’t survive in the harsh conditions of the street. Here’s a refined version of the sentence:
“Knowing he wouldn’t last a day on the street, they still chose to expel him so cruelly.”
This version maintains the original sentiment while clarifying the structure for better readability.
Your revised sentence is clear and conveys the intended sentiment well. If you’re looking for alternative phrasing or additional ways to express the same idea, here are a few options:
1. **”Despite knowing he wouldn’t survive a day on the street, they callously chose to kick him out.”**
2. **”Even though they knew he’d be unable to last a day on the street, they still decided to expel him with such cruelty.”**
3. **”Aware that he would barely make it through a day on the street, they nonetheless chose to cast him out mercilessly.”**
4. **”Knowing full well that he couldn’t endure a single day on the street, they nonetheless chose to drive him away with such harshness.”**
Each version emphasizes the contrast between the harshness of the action and the vulnerability of the person being expelled.
